09-16-2006, 01:30 AM
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Originally Posted by Nameless
Darkness and Silence:
As the song that was playing,
On the day I fell in love with you,
Begins, to play.
And as the emotion I felt,
Washes over me again,
I stop, to pray.
And as I’m asking forgiveness,
I’m known not to get.
And dropping my head.
And beginning to sweat.
I’m beginning to understand what this tune meant all along.
It opened and closed the last page of my life.
Left me panicked and stricken, with self-loathing and strife.
I close my eyes . . .
And dream of the day when you promised me.
That what had to be, was sure to be,
Would be.
And through it all, you’d be with me.
Again, I pray that God forgives me . . .
I drop my head,
And place the cylinder to my head.
I wish again,
I wish it didn’t have to end . . .
Like this,
Why must it end, like this?
The song has ended.
The room lights up abruptly,
To be followed . . .
By darkness and silence. |
Wow, this one is great too! I had the exact same feelings as Violette. Actually, I can't really make this a good post because I'd just be repeating everything that she said. But, I really like this stanza:
And dream of the day when you promised me.
That what had to be, was sure to be,
Would be.
And through it all, you’d be with me. |
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