Hey guys, wrote this the other night while listening to that video of Sunday, Bloody Sunday somebody put together from clips of all Bush's speeches. Bleeding brilliant video, but that's beside the point. The point is that I wrote this, now I don't know what to do with it, and I'm looking for title suggestions. Anything concerning the following specifically would be more than welcome:

-Different ending/conclusion (preferably in the form of extra lines or themes for them - I like what I've got so far, just not quite sure if it works as a whole.)
-Structure (ideas for verses, anything like that?)
-Title. What do I call this thing?

If you wouldn't terribly mind, fire away. :P

Here goes...

See how hatred turns to beauty
Weapons of war, guns and tanks
Jammed with flowers
Rusted by the rains of love

How long shall we wait
To wash away the blood and tears
Someday we shall unite
Sorrow will turn to joy
Anger will turn to love
And all our fears are washed away

Watch the miracle
Every day
A child's smile, a flower's golden bloom
The change will come in time
One by one, someday we'll see
How bitter the price of murder and war
And one by one someday we'll see
We don't need this anymore

Pray for hope
Hope for peace
And maybe one day
Someday we'll be released...