I loved this part of the first poem:
I watch clouds drift by
At a pace so haunting
"If only I could fly,"
Is my wish so daunting
Lonely and forgotten
Bound by crisp, winter air
Wooden beams so rotten
Keep me captive in your lair
Dreaming of things
Intangible and forbidden
"If only I had wings,"
Maybe they're just hidden...
its just so beautifully written.
I also thought "I Am" was really good.
