hm. i have trouble with thinking you wrote it. but judging by your other poems it fits.
i think you got it rhymed for the most not losing the mening of what you want to say. thats impressive. think poem's not missing nothing nor it has something redundant.
as i can see you fear death as is mentioned throughout the poem. you fear what you'll become. it just remainds me of how i feared this and that and you know what it happend? it came true. damn predictions. i somehow knew where i'd be today. i knew it all along, trying to change it. nothing.nada. i knew i'd f* up and that'd feel like waste of time. living throuh it. i knew it'd feel like losing time and life. already back then.loooooong back then.like 5.haha.how's that possible??
everything you said in the poem. is. true.
everything you said in the poem. is. true.

I'd call it 'Doubt'