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Old 10-04-2006, 01:50 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Very nice. I also get more in the writing mood when I hear new music that I enjoy.

Anyway. I really like how the two parts separate from each other - it's a like a line of division between being the victim and then prevailing. I'm not sure if that's how you meant it, but that's seriously what I felt when I read it. And it's very inspiring to me.

Since it's the same story, it's hard to say which part I really liked better. They both go great together to make the fullness of how I feel about it. Part 1, I could relate to extremely. But with the second part, I felt nothing but inspiration. I felt the anger there, but I also felt the refusal to succumb anymore.
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