Me: "Oh look it's like a story!

"
...
"wait...."
"oh wow. wtf was going through her mind?"
I like the story thing, and tying it in with Jack and Jill. Heavy shit. I wish I could erase some of those mental images though >.< Poor Jill...."drinking from father's fountain"....
I wish I could write like that. You're way talented.
And it's okay about the audio. I can die. I'll just come back as a ghost or something. No problem.
