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Violette · 09-16-2007, 10:39 PM

Wow... it's been a while. I hope some of you guys will remember me!

I'll try to come to EvBoard every now and then to catch up on some of the literary threads... I've graduated from college now and am now working in the "adult world," so to speak. But I've still been writing! So I hope that anyone here who had been reading my poems before will continue to come and give their comments and feedback. I've missed you guys, and as I said I hope to come around when I have a chance.

Here's something for you to read, btw.

Puzzle

Forgive me
as I study every movement
and analyze every sentence.
After weeks and months,
your name still melts like honey
on my tongue, and your mystery
remains unsolved.
There’s so much to consider,
from the subtle tilt in
your grasp on a coffee mug,
to the mischievous stars
sparkling in your eyes at night.
All I know, all I understand
is that neither of us cast this spell,
and neither of us
are complete on our own.
So, please, let me
find all your pieces –
all your strengths and weaknesses,
all your aspirations and idiosyncrasies.
Because all I long to do now
is learn who you are –
and who I may be.

© S.E.L. 2/23/2007

09-16-2007, 10:39 PM	#257 (permalink)
Violette Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Away from EvBoard for a while... I'll be back at some point wink Age: 24 Posts: 800 Points: 1,033.21 Bank: 793.40 Total Points: 1,826.61 Donate	Wow... it's been a while. I hope some of you guys will remember me! I'll try to come to EvBoard every now and then to catch up on some of the literary threads... I've graduated from college now and am now working in the "adult world," so to speak. But I've still been writing! So I hope that anyone here who had been reading my poems before will continue to come and give their comments and feedback. I've missed you guys, and as I said I hope to come around when I have a chance. Here's something for you to read, btw. Puzzle Forgive me as I study every movement and analyze every sentence. After weeks and months, your name still melts like honey on my tongue, and your mystery remains unsolved. There’s so much to consider, from the subtle tilt in your grasp on a coffee mug, to the mischievous stars sparkling in your eyes at night. All I know, all I understand is that neither of us cast this spell, and neither of us are complete on our own. So, please, let me find all your pieces – all your strengths and weaknesses, all your aspirations and idiosyncrasies. Because all I long to do now is learn who you are – and who I may be. © S.E.L. 2/23/2007 __________________ Come join!