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Old 03-24-2008, 10:43 AM   #11 (permalink)
AmongTheAshes20
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Another song, in format

(Intro)
Screaming, bleeding for the lie
It’s not enough to cry
I’m forever bleeding

(Verse)
I tried to see myself like you do
My eyes are tired of the lie
You run through my veins
Just could never feel you there, so I bleed
Release the thickest crimson tears
To remind me of you.

(Chorus)
You hold me up in your sky
A star that you prize
I can’t be your lie
So I bleed my tears away
I’m forever healing

(Verse)
An open lie that turns a crimson tide
Plead with me to love my lying soul
I have no more love to give
So I bleed for the lie
Forever healing
I pick the scabs of my past

(Chorus)
You hold me up in your sky
A star that you prize
I can’t be your lie
So I bleed my tears away
I'm forever healing

(Verse)
Forever bleeding in your wake
In my lost sorrow’s name
Let my eyes turn from the lie
And see my true self
I can’t see my true self

(Verse/out)
No more love to give,
No more blood to run
My open eyes can close the lies
I know my true self
I’m forever healing




EDIT!!!!

I messed with it a little. Changed some things, including the chorus. I think it sounds better as a song this way. But..meh.

Last edited by AmongTheAshes20 : 04-16-2008 at 10:57 PM.
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