yeah a couple of people commented on the melody and how exatly the song will be sung. different singers will sing it differently and it might not be how you wanted it to be sung. songs are.well pretty personal. when i write songs i have an idea of how i want them sung. so yeah. im ashuming your not too bothered. I can try and get my stuff working and record it. but yeah if you have any certain way you want it sung that needs addresing

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