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Old 04-09-2008, 12:45 PM   #367 (permalink)
Sweet Tigger
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Originally Posted by Shivercide View Post
Icy needles -
they hail down
from pockets in the sky.

I just stand there
amidst the downpour;
let it drench me
let it puncture chills throughout.

I shall cry alongside it,
and no one will notice.
I don't want them to notice
the true pain
that I really feel inside.

It's never happened before.
Never felt my heart held
so tightly (lovingly) together,
while at the same time
feel it shattered,
so broken.

For now I just want to stand here.
To feel this cold consume me,
to soak inside my confused tears
of which only the rain knows.
Wow Steph.

Every word you wrote, I can feel just all your feelings, and emotions.
I have never seen anything writen this way, just the way you descibe
things, in such a very unique way, words can't describe how heartful
it is.
As well as, how deep, and touching it really is.
It is so amazing, just how well you can actually picture this all visualy.
And how real this all really is.
Astounding work, as usual!!!
Your work, is very inspirering!!
<3
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