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Old 04-10-2008, 08:08 PM   #44 (permalink)
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summer smile

sunlight memory
a half formed thought
the words
just out of my reach
just out of my life

summer shower
i let the rain fall
down on me
golden dreaming
the closest i've come
to heaven

let this rain fall down
melt away
the frost of time

memories just a sequence
a sequence lost
frozen in time
go back to that place
go back to that day

reminisce
the sunlit showers
image of a summer smile
golden dreaming

just out of my reach
always
out of my reach
shut my eyes
and im
close to heaven

memories
my golden dreaming


i thought i would put my submission in for the monthly evboard writers group. i am happy with it and this way people can give me some constructive criticism which would be good
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We're the faeries from hell and we're all on a death wish
Blackbird singing in the dead of night,
Take these broken wings and learn to fly
All your life
You were only waiting for this moment to arise
Fly, Blackbird, fly
Into the light of the dark black night.
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