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Old 04-16-2008, 05:59 PM   #20 (permalink)
AmongTheAshes20
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My Vice

Hehe, well I can't wait until you become famous

Here is a song I just wrote...it's a little different from most of my stuff, I think. The tune I made for it doesn't sound too bad.

I left you behind
I thought I was free
But here you are
Haunting me

Get out of my mind
I have no words for you
And I don’t believe you can save me
Not this time
I can feel now, without you, my vice
I’m done bleeding, leave me

I left you behind
I thought I was free
But here you are
Haunting me

Indulge one last time, my vice
I won’t be keeping you
It’s not me, anymore
I left her long ago
But you still hunger for her
Have I not bled enough?

I left you behind
I thought I was free
But here you are
Haunting me

Not weak, or tired this time
You don’t have to try
‘Cause I know now, I don’t need you
You won’t pull me back there again
You are dead to me, my vice
Don’t try to save me


And also, i edited Forever Bleeding, if you wanna check it out.

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