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Well, I really like "Just today" - there seems to be a lot of emotion and desperation in it...it also gives me a sense of wanting to be alone so that the narrator can "recuperate"...which I can totally relate with. I like this song a lot...it flows very well and is nicely written!
"Why can't you make sense" is good, too. I got from it a sense of a very faulty relationship...and that the other person just can't be selfless and gives mixed messages. It's well written and is an interesting concept.
Nice job!
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