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AmongTheAshes20 · 04-19-2008, 10:33 AM

Well, I really like "Just today" - there seems to be a lot of emotion and desperation in it...it also gives me a sense of wanting to be alone so that the narrator can "recuperate"...which I can totally relate with. I like this song a lot...it flows very well and is nicely written!

"Why can't you make sense" is good, too. I got from it a sense of a very faulty relationship...and that the other person just can't be selfless and gives mixed messages. It's well written and is an interesting concept.

Nice job!

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AmongTheAshes20 Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Pennsylvania Age: 21 Posts: 93 Points: 8,255.45 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 8,255.45 Donate	Well, I really like "Just today" - there seems to be a lot of emotion and desperation in it...it also gives me a sense of wanting to be alone so that the narrator can "recuperate"...which I can totally relate with. I like this song a lot...it flows very well and is nicely written! "Why can't you make sense" is good, too. I got from it a sense of a very faulty relationship...and that the other person just can't be selfless and gives mixed messages. It's well written and is an interesting concept. Nice job!