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Originally Posted by snwwhtkng
The Rose
She rises from the soft brown Earth-
Leaving her impurities behind
Her delicate touch unmistakable
Her petals all but harmless
She blossoms over the rest
Her aroma fills the air
Intoxicating-
Casting her spell
Not one can survive her beauty,
Her touch undeniable
The thorns raise curiousity
I can't help but touch
Her thorns thrash at my hands
Cutting into my flesh
Blood sipping-
Draining me of my poison
The pain finally gone
The gash deep,
yet I dare not let her go
For I know time heals all wounds
I finally found her-
My star...
My rose
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Wow.....
I absolutely loved this poem!
Its very deep, heartfelt, and pasionate,
and expresses so much feeling and emotion.
Reading every word, I understand every word.
You have great talent, and should use it, and
go the whole legnth!!
Very Lovely!!
