Esuna: Personally, I thought of it as being a bit heavier, a bit like a radiohead or muse song. but your idea could work, I'll try comparing them in my mind soon.

Broken inside: you know, you're the only person who's actually commented on the first song. If you want to write like that I would suggest that you practice songwriting, that kinda states the obvious though. um no, I'm not in a band, I have friends who are starting a band but they don't really need me, It doesn't really bother me though.


If it's of any interest, the title "simple" was chosen deliberately because it opposes the structure and lyrics of the song. And because the song is about wanting it to be simple, which opposes real life.

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