Thank you and Thank you!

Dragonknight, what do you mean by "I don't know exactly what you could do with the verses though."? Just wondering...confused me a little.

This was definitely planned as a heavier song. The way Ev did "Thoughtless" by Korn is similar to how I imagined this. The chorus at the beginning would be sung in a slow and calming manner, accompanied with piano, and then would pick up hardcore for the first verse. The parentheses are kind of "whispers" in the background that would be understandable for sure, but overlapped in speech with the next line.

Thanks for comments guys <3