This definitely sounds like a heavy song...full of emotion and energy. Nothing in this song really grabbed me though, or made me feel like it was unique and profound. The lyrics themselves are not bad, they just don't have the same flow and power that your others have had. I guess that could be due to the possibility that you were just going for raw emotion/anger, so there was really no room for the language we're used to seeing from you (?). On the plus side, I think that if the instrumentals are done right, it could definitely turn out to be a good song, full of raw emotion, which always gets me rockin'

Hope I wasn't too harsh! It's all in good nature, though, promise! Keep up the good writing!