No you weren't too harsh, I was going for that kind of raw anger effect to see how it turned out. And i planned it in my mind as a song with interesting instument parts behind the voice, I wasn't going for the weird and unusual lyrics this time.

Oh, and thanks for your opinions, they're always welcome.

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