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Old 05-21-2008, 11:12 AM   #43 (permalink)
AmongTheAshes20
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Angel of Respite

Fallen;
Angel of respite,
Confined to earth with broken wings,
Resigned to life with broken dreams,
You’re all too much like me,

Enticing, thoughtfully,
The murky corners of my mind,
An effort to convince me,
That I will fly again,
When I’ve spent so much time,
Convincing myself,
That I will only fly in death,

(Chorus x2)
Fallen,
A dream of life,
Can I be saved?
Will you save me tonight?
Fallen angel of respite

Fallen,
A dream of life

A pulsing plea to make you see,
This world is not how it should be,
My mind is broken, like your wings,
Tired from trying to fly when,
All that’s left is tattered fragments,
Pieces broken and waiting for someone,
Like you,
To put them back together,
So for a time,
You can fly,
I can live...

But all respites have an end,
And we’ll both fall again,

(Chorus x2)

Fallen,
A dream of life.



This is a slow, rockish song. Kinda liike...Broken by Seether and Amy. Except maybe a little more calmish. The spoken structure of the lyrics is similar to Solitude by Ev.

This idea has been rolling around in my head for a couple days, so i just whipped it up haha. I am not sure about the chorus though.

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