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Old 06-02-2008, 10:16 AM   #41 (permalink)
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Helllooo!

Sorry, haven't been around for a while. Lot's of stuff goin' on!

I like the last song you posted. It has a lot of energy and emotion. It reminds me of someone who feels lost without another, maybe the one person who truly saw him, like it means nothing to exist without the them. It also gives me the impression that the person feels lonely, wanting desperately for someone to see and know him. Overall it was very interesting and well written.

Nice job.
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