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Awake and Dreaming · 06-02-2008, 08:03 PM

I really like this idea, but I'd like to point out something if I may.
You have one too many syllables in the first verse and two short in the second, and part of the last verse is missing...not that it has to match up with the number of syllables in each verse of the chorus, but I was just thinking that keeping the rhythm consistent might be helpful when singing it...just a thought.

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Awake and Dreaming n00blet Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: U.S. Posts: 10 Points: 193.28 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 193.28 Donate	I really like this idea, but I'd like to point out something if I may. You have one too many syllables in the first verse and two short in the second, and part of the last verse is missing...not that it has to match up with the number of syllables in each verse of the chorus, but I was just thinking that keeping the rhythm consistent might be helpful when singing it...just a thought.