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Raskull, your entry was chilling in its factor of loneliness and the sense of time running out. I really like how it was written, each verse really did seem like the time slipping away with nothing to be done about it...
Shannon, I love your choice of words and the way each short line gives a choked-up feeling, which definitely fits the content. Especially the last three lines.
Now if only more people would join in and post a writing!
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Originally Posted by Scratchy
I'm an innocent tool in the hand of the real evil, go prove otherwise
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"Nothing you confess could make me love you less...
...I'll stand by you."
Quod me nutrit me destruit
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