Yay finally some action in this place! Thank you both for your comments. You are far too kind.
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Originally Posted by Shivercide
Shannon, I love your choice of words and the way each short line gives a choked-up feeling, which definitely fits the content.
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I completly agree with Shiver. It played well on the cold feeling one gets when they want someone who wont/isnt there.
Shivercide your poem made me miss someone.
Very sad and sweet and short but strongly worded. It didnt need a word more.