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Old 07-30-2008, 11:23 PM   Nolla's Blooded Feathers Post #8
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Your recent prose is okay; I must be honest, though. It really isn't that original cause a lot of it contains content from Nightwish (and Within Temptation) songs. I do like the idea behind it, however.

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I don't really care how my structure goes because it is usually pretty much free thought and any with any structure at all are generally forced poems.
That really isn't true. A lot of my poems are structured, but completely natural. Everyone's writing style is different, yes; but if you want to be a bit more professional (Wolfie from EvThreads is an example), developing a structure is vital. Your "poems" are more like prose, because most poetry has structure =] I learned this (and many other things) after taking many writing classes during my highschool years. Most of 'em were college level, being that they were "honors" (college level), so I am pretty sure I know what I am talking about ;D

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I don't like writing sappy love poems because they are sickening to write and to read, no matter how heartfelt. In all honesty, love poems make me gag, so I don't write them.
Hm... I have an idea as to why you may not like them. Has anyone ever written one for you? I used to be the same way, generally, but after Jamie (CrownlessAgain ) wrote a few for me, I loved them to bits. Maybe, when your girl finally writes one for you, you'll see them as a bit more than annoying little pieces of writing

Btw, Jamie and I have seen your siggies on EvThreads. We've set a good example, I guess ^_^ next time, though, give credit where it is due for awesome ideas.
i am teh only "poet", yanno. Tuomas is the male poet, and I am teh female poet. Booyahz. xD


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