no problem, and I meant every word!
Those were all so different and yet so great in different ways. I especially liked these.
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In fields of roses . . .
Searching endless skies,
That hide,
In endless emerald eyes . . .
To feel alive . . .
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In case it was any wonder, I really loved this part. It is just so beautiful.
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Life-blood, of a system, that crushes its components;
Moving hand to hand, through the freedom land.
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this whole piece was just totally alive, and very powerful. You didn't hold back! I could feel your anger, and it was very strong.
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Pacing through my circle of stones.
Over,
Fragmented memories . . .
And broken bones . . .
Surrounded by the echoes of,
A million voices,
All together;
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And this one was awesome. Especially this part. I loved the way you rhymed it, and the pattern. it has a great feel to it.
You sure posted a bunch! I love it, keep it up!