Yeah, trailing off like that was one of the few things that I've done consciously to a poem. I think it just reflects a lot on what I was trying to describe. Because I COULDN'T say it. I didn't want to scare her away.

Broken Vessel, was inspired by all of the beautiful things in life that are doomed to end. Which is all of them. Sooner or later . . .

Thanks again for your comments. They're great to get.
Maybe I'll post a few more today . . .