Wow. I came in here for a quick look at some of your work, and ended up reading every single one at least once sometimes two or three times. I mean-your writing is excellent. At first I didn't like how you had the same formation every single time, but the last couple pages you changed it up a bit, and I like that. So yeah I'm obsessed with imagery, and you had tons of it, and you really have a way with words. I noticed you put that you could write about happy things but the sad darker things come to you more easily. I also agree, and it may not be because you're an unhappy person, but I find that it's easier to write about that, because happy things make you sound all girly or unexperienced. I dunno, just my opinion.

Well anyway, my favorites were: Chemical nourishment, Fool, Butterfly Kisses, Whole, Exodus, and Black & White


So please continue writing! I'll be back..

<33 sarah