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nostalgicdemise · 08-03-2004, 07:21 PM

I guess I'm due to lay down one of my own. Any comments/critics are welcome, PM not really necessary. This is just more my style than others I've written, but I have more 'defined' ones stashed away.....somewhere.

At a glance

You said
The sun is cold
And the stars have lost their touch forever
You said
The day has shattered
And the night can’t find your pieces.
And I found myself drifting
Outward from their stolid eyes
Cast aside to some
Barren hilltop
Curled up, wishing the
Sunset could lead me to your
Fragments.
But the light faded to
Silence.
And I was swept away
Through bitter tunneled cages,
The sparks of memories
Glinting past my cheeks,
Too cold to reach for them
Too weary to protest
so I lay there forever,
Those intangible reflections
Burning your kiss
through my skin
My scars,
My hands,
My touch as lost
as the stars you
condemned
In me….

08-03-2004, 07:21 PM	#15 (permalink)
nostalgicdemise Member Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: noitacoL Age: 22 Posts: 289 Points: 1,527.46 Bank: 1,294.69 Total Points: 2,822.15 Donate	I guess I'm due to lay down one of my own. Any comments/critics are welcome, PM not really necessary. This is just more my style than others I've written, but I have more 'defined' ones stashed away.....somewhere. At a glance You said The sun is cold And the stars have lost their touch forever You said The day has shattered And the night can’t find your pieces. And I found myself drifting Outward from their stolid eyes Cast aside to some Barren hilltop Curled up, wishing the Sunset could lead me to your Fragments. But the light faded to Silence. And I was swept away Through bitter tunneled cages, The sparks of memories Glinting past my cheeks, Too cold to reach for them Too weary to protest so I lay there forever, Those intangible reflections Burning your kiss through my skin My scars, My hands, My touch as lost as the stars you condemned In me…. __________________ My Myspace URL may or may not be my username. (But you should try to visit me, anyways). Last edited by nostalgicdemise : 08-06-2004 at 08:21 PM.