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Old 11-11-2004, 11:06 PM   #13 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by LaDiablo
On Enmity, the chorus had an excellent rhythm all except for the last line, which was may be a beat or so too long .
Yeah... that's been the hardest thing for me to smooth out in any full song that I've written. I'll change it some day, but I just have to think of the right thing to put in there.

Thanks for your input, and your kind words!
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