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Old 11-12-2004, 11:17 PM   My Poetry Post #2
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my god...can you write...`hurting' struck me the most...you have so much gorgeous imagery throughout all your pieces...the alst one `the girl from Nowhere' reminded me of a gypsy, living a bohemmien life, with references to long, dark hair, and tattered clothes, and being in a carnival when it's closed...also, `What Lays In My Dreams' is very beautiful, but very sad. fave line: `a fading faeries dreams, a childs midnight dreams' - great starting line, it really grabs you...and then `gods great plan viciously shuffled'.
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