omg! i agree with axes...so beautiful and so sad- your story is sooo good, thanks for posting it, and i loved your poems, `parody of society' is sooo good, and i loved that line in `blood in the snow', `god loves the sinner but not the sin' and also love your q.s, `where did you come from, where did you go?'- that was so powerful, in fact the whole poem made me stop and drift off with my thoughts about what you were saying...the only criticism i would make, is that it is a bit black and white, in the sense that one is an earth version of an angel, while the other is depicted as the devil's advocate...