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Old 11-26-2004, 12:07 AM   #20 (permalink)
*Jeremy*
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Raskull
well i figure i should make my own little thread to put my shit in. so anyways i know i already posted this one but not in this thread

Blood (named now)
Am I really to blame for all this blood spill?
Are you so ready to get me away from home?
Can you believe that I am here still?
You think every thing is okay when I’m alone

Smell my fear now
Kill me now
Do you still think I care about how I’m treated?

I just can’t make myself care about you
I just can’t help but hate this life

I cut deeper in my skin
I scratch harder to kill things within
And smear my blood on your face
And laugh at the taste

Can you here them?
Deeper, deeper, more, more
I can’t breath I can’t die
Pick it up again
What can I do?
Die, die, die
Am I no use to you?

Am I really to blame for all this blood spill?
Are you so ready to get me away from home?
Can you believe that I am here still?
You think every thing is okay when I’m alone

Deeper, deeper, more, more
Pick it up again
Die, die, die

I cut deeper in my skin
I scratch harder to kill things within
And smear my blood on your face
And laugh at the taste

You could never see the pain
You could never hear me scream
You could feel me go insane
How ordinary can I seem?

Do you see this?
Can you hear me?
Do you feel this?

Tearing at my skin
Releasing blood and sin

deeper in my skin
harder to kill things within
smear my blood on your face
And laugh at the taste

Deeper, harder, die, die. die, DIE, DIE
Again, slower, more, blood, more
blood, blood, blood, bleed, more, blood


and here's another one i wrote in math class (it's kinda crappy but oh well)


Watch Me
Oh my sweet pain
I’ve gone sweetly insane

And I am happy now
I’m going to break down now
I no longer feel like me
I am stupid
I’m not free
I am useless

Cut me
Watch me bleed

I’m ready for something
I’m really worth nothing
And I know you love to watch me

Watch me bleed!

Nothing’s real
Everything’s so untrue
We can never heal
This knife is for you

I’m ready
I’m ready for something
It really means nothing
I’m dieing!
I’m suffocating
I’m drowning
Oh I’m bleeding
I know you love to watch me

Now watch me bleed

Be helpless
Be just like me
This is my world

Welcome to hell

I can not breathe
This I still can’t believe
You’re watching me
And you’re happy

Fading, my world is fading
But I leave behind my horror

So I’m ready
I’m ready for your world
I’m ready for hell
I’m so ready

Watch me bleed
Hear me scream
Sweet pain
Nothing’s real
Sweetly insane
Never heal
Fading
dieing
Cut me
Watch me bleed
Now watch me bleed
WATCH ME!
WATCH ME BLEED!
BLEED!
Nothing’s real


*will post more later (but won't be updated often)



Very nice poetry.... very deep. Post More
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