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Old 12-15-2004, 07:36 AM   #106 (permalink)
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Ignore the bitter evening air;
Stand, enraptured by the stars...
As if a change in constellation,
Could bring solace to my suffering...
This whole piece brought tears to my eyes. It's so pained.

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My eyes...
...

Feel laced with sandpaper...
That is an amazing line. I never even thought of that metaphor before, but I'm feeling it right now, and it fits perfectly,lol.
It's so nice to see your work again!
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