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Old 08-06-2005, 09:26 PM   #19 (permalink)
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lol You can tell they're about different people... well I can at least. I think the first one flowed well, though I think it could of been a tiny bit more creative but I liked the slightly angry feel to it. I loved the second one because it made me think about how it was thought up and human emotions and needs. Over all I think you got some skill and you need to keep writing!

Btw, the mods are slightly less strict on double posting in the "your stuff" forum. I don't think they'll be mad in this case.
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