Josi, I really like your writing... it's teriffic, and your english is fine.. Keep writing

EDIT: A new writing called "It Ends With Death"

Do you even know how I feel at night?
Wishing to sleep thru til daylight
But waking in a worried mess
And never wanting venture in to dreams unknown

Horror and sadness of epic proportion
Death and Depression only can follow
Need to see outside the Dark
And Open my eyes to the wonders
That this life can bring.

But only you can save me
From the coldness now,
Your death will set me free
And light the fire agian inside of me

But death will not set me free
Not death alone at least.
To see you miserable, to see you cry
Just once before I die

This wish is what drives me
What keeps me carrying on
I know I'll break you one day
Just like you broke me
That day will come you know
The day I am set free
I pray to god that day
..... IS TODAY!!!

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