Your songs are very powerful, and I like the structure you've decided to use for them all. However, I wanted to make one comment... it seems that you make a few confusions with contractions/possessives.

A lot of the time (nearly all) when you say "your" you really should be using "you're" as in "you are" If you're unsure of whether or not to use the contraction or the possessive... try it as a contraction first and separate it to see if it sounds right. Here's an example:

"Your only a whisper away" Make this into a contraction first "You're only a whisper away" and then separate/expand the contraction "You are only a whisper away"... in this case "You are" makes sense, so you'd want to use "you're" instead of "your" which shows possession.

This same rule can be applied to the possessive "its"... I hope that helped. I really like the pace you have in a lot of your songs, and the choruses are especially strong. Keep up the good work, and keep posting!

EDIT: Also, to Josi... might I suggest creating a "Your Stuff" thread of your own to post all of the work that's yours? That way you can also get feedback, and develop your own group of admirers ~.^

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