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Old 01-10-2006, 06:32 AM   #2 (permalink)
Ashlee
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You have some really great poems here, I especially like 'Razorslut' and 'Silent tears'

the stanza in razorslut is very powerful

Quote:
When she cries on the floor
She says she is no whore
So many thoughts in her head
They make her tears turn red
She calls herself a razorslut
Memories make her cut
Great work
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