amazing work *Dawn*! Loved your Inuyasha drawings, very well done. EXCELENT dragonfly pic, the humping dragonflies are hilarious. The drawing if the papillon, you COULD try a bit more detail on the legs.... (NOTE: I'm NOT artist, hell, all my drawings suck ass, so... don't think my advice is the best in the world.) And wolf's Raisin... it's drawings like that that brighten up my day with senseless laughter. Don't worry about transfering mind to paper, it's VERY hard to get it done well. I can't do it with writing, and that's just words. Try and get it into pictures. I see a story perfectly, all the characters, side plots, etc... but when I'm translating it into paper... crap. it's hard. It takes time, but I'm sure you'll get the hang of it. Keep up the good work, can't wait for more.

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