Wow, great stuff you've got here. I especially liked the thrid poem (comparisons), and this last one. Kinda... retells how I used to feel a while back about this one girl I liked.
Quote:
inside this prison we have created
you run free, and I am confined to wait forever for yesterday
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I love those last too lines. I like your style, your poems and songs are very good. Keep posting, I'd love to see more.
