Okay..Im posting in here for the first time. I will comment other work later but im in a hurry.
I want to improve, so let me have it. I think in order to learn how to write/do anything you have to learn to take the criticism. And if im going to take it I might as well take it from seemingly very knowledgable writers.

A word never spoken,
too safe to soon,
a leap to big
leading to her doom
soft spoken whispers
that kill her inside
leaving behind
her memories of time

soft spoken whispers
led by the thoughts
that tangle up her mind
and keep her confined
keeping quiet showing no signs
regretting the past
of long twisted lies

soft spoken whispers
that broke the silence
follwed by tears...
that show no alliance

Go for it...

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