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Old 02-12-2006, 01:59 PM   #38 (permalink)
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Before you finish coloring the rest of the dog, you might want to adjust his stance a bit. He's at the wrong perspective, and looking at him is very awkward because of it. It appears as if his face and his body are at a 90 degree angle toward one another. Which is, realistically impossible.

You can also see, that if you look at your avatar, the dog is in a much more appropriate stance, as the back of his body is receding at an angle away from his head and front.

If you do decide to fix him, it will make a huge difference in the finished product. But overall, I think it's adorable, and I like the way you stylized a lot of the features, especially the face, lmbo. So cute.

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