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~river~ · 04-08-2006, 06:12 AM

ajchz, thankyou so much what you said has given me the confidence i need to post more. to hear someone like your stuff is a great feeling.

this is one of my not so great works but all the same it is important to me and my change in writing. it has to do with my form of coping with family fights and i think there are pretty obivous references to it.

PAINT ME

Shattered glass
A broken frame
The smiling faces
The ones to blame

The quite
The clam
The peace before
The thunder storm

A broken bomb
An empty threat
The fear still felt
The blast still there

Hollow inside
Yet filled to the brim
The same old feelings
Rise again

The colour of passion
The colour of hate
The colour of pain
So paint me red

The colour of strength
Of strong emotions
So paint me red

I am red inside and out

The storm arrives
My veins are flowing
The colour red
It spreads throughout
My hollow body

04-08-2006, 06:12 AM	#4 (permalink)
~river~ Natalie Cook Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 1,989 Points: 1,060.83 Bank: 189,532.25 Total Points: 190,593.08 Donate	ajchz, thankyou so much what you said has given me the confidence i need to post more. to hear someone like your stuff is a great feeling. this is one of my not so great works but all the same it is important to me and my change in writing. it has to do with my form of coping with family fights and i think there are pretty obivous references to it. PAINT ME Shattered glass A broken frame The smiling faces The ones to blame The quite The clam The peace before The thunder storm A broken bomb An empty threat The fear still felt The blast still there Hollow inside Yet filled to the brim The same old feelings Rise again The colour of passion The colour of hate The colour of pain So paint me red The colour of strength Of strong emotions So paint me red I am red inside and out The storm arrives My veins are flowing The colour red It spreads throughout My hollow body __________________ We're the faeries from hell and we're all on a death wish Blackbird singing in the dead of night, Take these broken wings and learn to fly All your life You were only waiting for this moment to arise Fly, Blackbird, fly Into the light of the dark black night.