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Old 04-21-2006, 09:03 PM   #19 (permalink)
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and the second poem i mentioned in the previous entry.
i know i am really the only person interested in this but i hope others can get something from my work.

cannot breathe

I am losing you
You’re slipping through
My fingers

Sand passes
Shortening of time
I wish I had
It all again

see the fire in your eyes
eternal flame is gone
Fuelled by an anger
Burnt by what
I cannot understand

Slipping through the cracks
Shattered beyond my repair
I cannot breathe in air
I cannot breathe in air

Chocking on all that is said
Unable to believe
Unable to believe
I am no more
Then space to you

What was my sin
What was my sin

Losing you faster then
I can comprehend
Lost to all that’s bleeds
Lost to all that breathes

I wish I wasn’t losing you
I wish I wasn’t flesh and blood.
Maybe I would seem more in
Your tainted eyes

I cannot breathe in air
What was my sin
What is my sin
I cannot breathe in air

Dying without your love
why don’t you care
You gave me life
You gave me life

Sand passes
Shortening of time
I wish I had
It all again
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Words are flying out like endless rain into a paper cup
They slither while they pass
They slip away across the universe
Pools of sorrow waves of
Joy are drifting thorough my open mind
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