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Old 05-04-2006, 12:01 AM   #33 (permalink)
Apryl
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I have a word of advice for everyone who's already posted.
It's called revision. You still have over a week and a half to go through, and make it better and expand on your ideas/vocabulary. I think that's a huge problem with a lot of the writers here... There's a difference between a piece that you would present, and just writing down everything that comes to mind, and then changing a few words around so it sounds okay.

Take your time... Become inspired by other things. It can make it a lot better, I promise.
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