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Old 05-04-2006, 12:46 AM   #35 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by Apryl
I have a word of advice for everyone who's already posted.
It's called revision. You still have over a week and a half to go through, and make it better and expand on your ideas/vocabulary. I think that's a huge problem with a lot of the writers here... There's a difference between a piece that you would present, and just writing down everything that comes to mind, and then changing a few words around so it sounds okay.

Take your time... Become inspired by other things. It can make it a lot better, I promise.
I'll do the needed revisions on mine tomorrow. Not sure what all I am going to do yet since it is meant to be a child with little vocabulary ability but plenty of sass and wit,lol. I'll sleep on it. Mostly just need to decide what needs to stand out as dialogue and what will remain the baby's thoughts.
Tonight I am totally not in any mood to play with my writing whatsoever.
*uninspired, unmoved and basically pissed at the world*
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