WOW.
I had no idea you wrote lyrics...and I think they are very, very good. I love the emotions displayed, they are fearless and don't sacrifice great metaphorical description for getting a point across clearly. You are able to pull both off at the same time, which I could never do. Hehe.
I especially liked "Soul Promise" - I can kinda relate to that one, especially these lines:
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Originally Posted by Deinna
I longed for something that could never be mine. How can it be different this time?
Then suddenly you're there.
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It reminds me of (embarrassed) a time in my teenage years, but something that I went through nonetheless that has touched my life ever since.
But the last one, "Voices" is my favorite, as that one rings the closest to my own heart.
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Originally Posted by Deinna
I need a piece of serenity
to hold a mind that's pure
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Those words, along with the rest of them, are more close to the thoughts in my own mind than you know, or I can say. Really.
But not only because I can relate to them, your songs are just wonderful. The flow is amazingly well-done, which is especially hard to show others when writing lyrics because the music isn't being heard at the same time. A lot of times lyrics themselves look like badly-written poems when the music doesn't accompany it, but these haven't sacrificed flow for anything - and I would really love to hear the music to it as well. Hehe.
Seriously, I could talk about this all day but I'll spare ya. ;) But I would like to see more in the future.
*goes in search to see if you have a poetry thread*