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Old 05-23-2006, 08:00 AM   #94 (permalink)
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I'm surprised that it took me so long to find this thread. I thought I'd give it a try with one of my recent pieces to see what you all thought:

Daydreamer’s Lie

I know I smile all the time
And maybe I’m done waiting
Just a daydreamer’s lie
Just to keep on breathing
I know I’ve lost part of me
As I watched you leave
And though I seem charming
You should know I’m fibbing
Because, behind closed doors
While no one’s watching
I’m still here without you
I’m still bleeding this through

I don’t want to say goodbye
It’s like they’re tearing us apart
I feel it looming; you’ll be gone soon
And I don’t want to believe
Just keep telling myself this isn’t true



But you won’t see any tears
Like shadows that my memories fear
If keep on lying, keep on trying
Keep on feeling what I felt in you
I know I’m losing you Sunday
I should be better now, some say
Quicksand’s too thin I’m sinking in
I’m drifting into my dreams
Just to feel you near again
Just to feel that we’re one again
I need to say so much more
But cannot find the words to say

I don’t want to see you leave
It’s like they want us to believe
That it was never well, sickness can’t tell
And I don’t want to believe
Just to let you feel I’ll ever be okay



I don’t want to say goodbye
It’s like they’re tearing us apart
I feel it looming; you’ll be gone soon
And I don’t want to believe
Just keep telling myself this isn’t true

I don’t want to see you leave
It’s like they want us to believe
That it was never well, sickness can’t tell
And I don’t want to believe
Just to let you feel I’ll ever be okay

Lie to me; tell me you’re still here…
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