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Old 05-23-2006, 12:59 PM   #25 (permalink)
Boadicea
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Thought I'd give this a try... here's my effort

Red specks on daisies

Chambered walls, broken down little dolls
Something I hate, god I wish I was okay
Wind gusts my lovely, red specks on daisies
And I hope you see me now, unable to frown
Below the bridges where you drove me down
Caring less about the image you left me with
Wasteful tides that drove me to tears
They’ve been buried with the cloudy days
I know you seem to fame my tiny mirrors
Looking glass your arrogance couldn’t fear
Let me tell you now, I’ve pushed you away
Cowered my heart into torn tattered ribbons
Just to remember to forget your face
Maybe it’s done now that scissors undone
The memories that your vengeance forgot
When you left me bleeding terribly, endlessly
My skin’s the flesh that couldn’t weep
This darling girl’s the one you couldn’t keep
Forget the torn flowers that lay at my feet
I went and made you a calloused memory
Goodbye, my sinful dying valentine
In my rage I made you something to teach
Perforated lungs a sight for sore eyes to see
It’s gone this blood on roses, I’m gone
Lay beneath your cheat, rotten lonesome
Now baby, don’t forget to remember me
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