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Black&Red · 06-12-2006, 08:12 PM

RE: Black&Red: Interesting piece. Morning isn't always a happy time for some people. For the narrator, it sounds like morning is when his/her nightmarish life comes back to life. Nice contrast. I especially like the first stanza.

Violette- Thank you, Yes mornings are not always great. You got some from it I didn't even see. Rather I didn't know I put in, but felt it and didn't know I wrote it in, Thanks for seeing that, now I see it.

charmedone2006- Your story was awsome, it reminded me when I got hit by a car cause I felt I fell, down and down. I almost died right there at the edge of death. So very powerful to me, and nicely done Rock on.

Carmen- It's so small, but I really liked it, I'm gonna read it again, wait.........Ok ya no more then just to say its great!!!! It's one of those poems that make you feel good, never read one that made me feel good.

06-12-2006, 08:12 PM	#137 (permalink)
Black&Red Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Brea, Ca Age: 21 Posts: 160 Points: 857.44 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 857.44 Donate	RE: Black&Red: Interesting piece. Morning isn't always a happy time for some people. For the narrator, it sounds like morning is when his/her nightmarish life comes back to life. Nice contrast. I especially like the first stanza. Violette- Thank you, Yes mornings are not always great. You got some from it I didn't even see. Rather I didn't know I put in, but felt it and didn't know I wrote it in, Thanks for seeing that, now I see it. charmedone2006- Your story was awsome, it reminded me when I got hit by a car cause I felt I fell, down and down. I almost died right there at the edge of death. So very powerful to me, and nicely done Rock on. Carmen- It's so small, but I really liked it, I'm gonna read it again, wait.........Ok ya no more then just to say its great!!!! It's one of those poems that make you feel good, never read one that made me feel good. Last edited by Black&Red : 06-14-2006 at 02:24 PM.