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Violette · 06-14-2006, 12:52 PM

Wow... it's already almost time for a new topic? Time flies, I guess.

charmedone2006: I agree with Black&Red, that was definitely a powerful story your poem told. Including the crying brother was really what did it for me. And the poem itself had a nice flow. Good job - and feel free to post more stuff in future topics.

Carmen: Your piece doesn't need to be any longer - it's so sweet. I liked that very last line, too; and good idea to have it sitting apart from the rest of the poem.

Return to Chaos: I don't think you need to worry about being rusty at writing poetry.

I thought it was very good. It had some beautiful images and descriptions of feelings. Bravo!

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Violette Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Away from EvBoard for a while... I'll be back at some point wink Age: 24 Posts: 800 Points: 1,033.21 Bank: 793.40 Total Points: 1,826.61 Donate	Wow... it's already almost time for a new topic? Time flies, I guess. charmedone2006: I agree with Black&Red, that was definitely a powerful story your poem told. Including the crying brother was really what did it for me. And the poem itself had a nice flow. Good job - and feel free to post more stuff in future topics. Carmen: Your piece doesn't need to be any longer - it's so sweet. I liked that very last line, too; and good idea to have it sitting apart from the rest of the poem. Return to Chaos: I don't think you need to worry about being rusty at writing poetry. I thought it was very good. It had some beautiful images and descriptions of feelings. Bravo! __________________ Come join!